That doesn't look right. Something off about her eyebrows. No...maybe it's her forehead. Nope...it's her hairline. Gotta be. It's too low. Or too high maybe. CRAP! Something's off, but I cant figure out what. You know...it could be her jaw line. Too wide. Nope. Now it's too narrow and her face looks long. Put that back, but the chins definitely too big. Makes her look manish. Yeah, that's it..that's working! But...now her mouth looks a little weird. The lips are too big or something. Damn it, why did I try to make her smiling? I can never get that to look right. But she needs to be smiling..it works for the piece. You know what, fuck it I'm starting over.
Man, that's one of the best figures I've ever done! The pose is perfect and I really got some nice energy in it. Its always a great to nail a figure in the quick gesture drawing. Now, I just need to draw the face on there and we're gold. An hour later.....
Son of a mother, that face gave me hell! Didn't think I'd ever get it to look right. Hmm...the heads not fitting quite right on the shoulders. What the hell happened?! It was fine before...I must've moved it a bit with all the damn erasing on the face. CRAP!!! Now I've got a face I like and a body I like but they don't work together! Maybe if I move her shoulder a little itll work. no, that's not working at all. CRAP! I can probably tweak her torso angle just a tad and that should line the head up better. No, that's ALL fucked up now. I'm not redrawing that face. I'm just not. You know what, fuck it I'm starting over.















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you'd be surprised by the amount of work I do on them. Asma is currently the character I worked the most on. -and I don't show much on DA- not only with pencils, but also with words.
thanks for sharing your work!